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Post by Fritz on Apr 9, 2007 9:06:34 GMT -4
Ghostbusters West Coast: From This MomentBy Fritz Baugh September 3, 2006--Timeline Year Twenty-Four Many members of GBI come together for a special event: the wedding of Chelsea Aberdeen and Fritz Baugh. --------------------------------------------------------- No ghostbusting action. And if you thought "Forever" was overly indulgent in emotion, stay away from this one. Does include lots of cameos from various members of GBI.
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Post by SuperStantzio on Apr 9, 2007 10:36:02 GMT -4
Ooh, Fritz that was a beautiful story! I had tears in m eyes when I read it. Great job!
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Post by Silent Seraphim on Apr 9, 2007 11:08:54 GMT -4
Aw, I just love this story. I've always liked this pairing, coming second only to Egon and Janine in my personal favourites (with Bo and Jen a close third), and I have been eagerly anticipating this story for a long time. I love the way you've got echoes of Egon and Janine's wedding here, with the flashbacks detailing Fritz and Chelsea's history, as well as the great cameos from various members of GBI past, present and afterlife. I like the way Ray's wife (whoever she may be) guided Ray well away from Rachel, no doubt worried that she might end up making an appearance in one of his dreams... ;D It's nice to have a change of pace from the busting stories, and it was just the perfect read for a sunny, spring-like Bank Holiday Monday. The very personal touches here and there make this story all the more poignant, and I'm sure I'm not the only one to have a bit of a lump in the throat more than once while reading it. And the ending... Beautiful. Just... Beautiful. You're going to have us all in a blubbering mess! Another lovely story, Fritz. Thank you.  |
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Post by Fritz on Apr 9, 2007 11:56:41 GMT -4
I will admit this was another one that worried me. I always get worried when I do a story that has too much to do with "me", like I'm being self-indulgent or something.
I will say that, after doing three weddings, I'm running out of new twists to put in them. I think it's going to be a while before I do any more.
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Post by Miss Janine on Apr 10, 2007 3:21:54 GMT -4
Just beautiful. You really have a touch with weddings. Who else is left to get married? |
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Post by ghostdiva on Apr 10, 2007 15:04:51 GMT -4
This was just lovely, and I think it wass unique in its own right, I know that it would be difficult to write so many weddings and make them different, but it is different in its own way. A very good character piece too.
ghostdiva
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Post by Dr. Vincent Belmont on Apr 26, 2007 3:45:53 GMT -4
Who else is left to get married? Vincent Belmont and Jill Valentine. Chronologically, as of 2007 they've been married nearly 4 years, but I never wrote anything to really "set it in stone." If I don't get around to at least writing a blurb or drawing a wedding photo, Jill will probably do it for me.  |
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