CJ
Doberman
Doom Patrol...Yeah you heard right
Posts: 99
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Post by CJ on Jul 13, 2007 16:25:26 GMT -4
Darn you Farah! You must be eating Fritz's Wheaties when it comes to pumping these stories out
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Post by SuperStantzio on Jul 13, 2007 17:54:35 GMT -4
Yes I think I am. I have a lot of stories that I wanted to share and I decided to come out of my shell and start posting them. I written about 32 stories over a 2 year period.
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Post by SuperStantzio on Jul 19, 2007 19:02:37 GMT -4
Soon, Ray and CJ headed back to the camping grounds since they had caught enough fish for the day. This was their last day here, they have to go back home tomorrow.
Once they returned to the campgrounds, Ray and CJ talked about how well the weekend went and how fast it went by. They also talk about how they had enjoyed themselves while Ray was cooking the fish they had caught. They both wanted to stay for another day, sadly Ray has to go back to work on Monday. They are going to leave in the morning.
“Wow, this had been the best fishing trip ever,” CJ, declared. “It had been super. Thanks for taking me, Dad!”
“You’re welcome, CJ,” Ray smiled as he ruffled his son’s hair while keeping an eye out on the fish that was cooking over an open pit.
“I wished that we can stay one more day this has been so much fun. I’m still happy that I caught an Rainbow Trout .” CJ grinned still thinking about that wonderful moment.
Ray laughed, “I know, CJ. But hey; I promise that next time when we come back, we’ll stay for a week.”
“Thanks, Dad.” CJ replied.
The fishes were done and they ate them. They cleaned off the dinner plates and decided to make smores again for dessert. But this time they added reese's pieces to them. They were wonderful, after cleaning up the mess they had make from making smores, Ray and CJ spent the rest the day reading and discussing what their favorite Captain Steel comics were, until it was time to go to the tent for a good night sleep.
Ray and CJ woke up early Sunday morning, they washed up and ate a quick breakfast; since they have a long drive back home. Ray and CJ took down the tent first. They then folded it up and put it in the trunk, after the tent was taken care of, they gathered up their fishing equipment, clothes, and all the things they had brought with them.
15 minutes later, everything had been packed and ready to go. Ray and CJ double-checked to make sure that nothing was missing or left behind. Finally after checking to make sure they all had their stuff together, Ray and CJ got into the car and drove away from the lake.
Ten hours later around three in the afternoon, Ray pulled up in the driveway to their home. They stepped out of the car and started to take the things out of the trunk.
While they were doing this, Elaine and Jules came outside to greet them.
“Hi, guys. Welcome home. How was the trip?” Elaine ask as she hug both her husband and son. Jules did the same also.
“It was awesome, Dad and I really enjoyed ourselves and the best thing that I caught a fish. It was a Rainbow Trout!” CJ smiled proudly showing Elaine and Jules the picture of him with the fish.
“Wow, that’s impressive,” Jules smiled at her brother as she looked at the picture.
“Very good, CJ.” Elaine also smiled at her son and gave him another hug because she was so proud.
“Thanks, Mom and Jules.” He replied, blushing a little at all of the attention.
Together, the family went inside the house to eat since it was Ray and CJ were hungry after the long drive. Once inside, and dinner was on the tablem Ray and CJ continued to tell Elaine and Jules about their weekend at the lake. They knew that in their hearts, they’ll would go back to the lake to fish again. It had been a wonderful father and son bonding trip.
The End
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Post by SuperStantzio on Jul 20, 2007 9:39:16 GMT -4
I worked my rear end off this story and I hardly got any comments at all. I'm a little sad about that..
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Jason Knetge
Doberman
The Data Says He Will Kick Your Ass
Posts: 115
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Post by Jason Knetge on Jul 20, 2007 15:16:26 GMT -4
oh it's all dun now I will lisson to the hole thing on Saturday
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Post by SuperStantzio on Jul 20, 2007 16:08:15 GMT -4
Yes it is and my story is twevle pages long! LOL
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Post by Fritz on Jul 21, 2007 8:28:48 GMT -4
I worked my rear end off this story and I hardly got any comments at all. I'm a little sad about that.. I completely relate to that. I wish I had some answers, but I don't. I hope you don't become too discouraged. It's obvious you have a lot of affection for your character; it shows.
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Post by SuperStantzio on Jul 21, 2007 11:21:04 GMT -4
Thanks, I won't Fritz! I really enjoy writing and sharing my stories. ;D
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