BlackMaria
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Post by BlackMaria on Jan 27, 2006 11:39:07 GMT -4
Excellent job. Liked the past & present time contract which made the anticipation splendid. Now, you about writing the story of the biirth of the twins? (I'm greedy)
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Post by ghostdiva on Jan 27, 2006 11:56:06 GMT -4
Hahaha! I was waiting to see how long it would take someone to ask this! Hahahaha.
No rest for the weary huh Fritz? ghostdiva
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Post by Silent Seraphim on Jan 27, 2006 14:31:43 GMT -4
That's the same for me. It's just perfect. No-one could have written this as well as you did. Thank you so much for this. It is just beautiful.
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Post by Fritz on Jan 27, 2006 17:20:51 GMT -4
The Twins' brith story is already in the works. It'll probably be a little while, but it's in the works.
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Post by Yami Mirai on Jan 28, 2006 13:52:44 GMT -4
The Twins' brith story is already in the works. It'll probably be a little while, but it's in the works. Yay! ;D Yet another milestone in the lives of the greatest couple ever. I can hardly wait!
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Post by SuperStantzio on Jan 28, 2006 13:56:02 GMT -4
That is great! I cannot wait for the story either!
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Post by BlackMaria on Jan 28, 2006 15:36:55 GMT -4
The Twins' brith story is already in the works. It'll probably be a little while, but it's in the works. Fritz, have ya considered a probably less covered moment: when Janine tells Egon she's pregnant? Could be touching & funny. Forver will get several readings; it takes a reread to catch the finer points.
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Post by Miss Janine on Jan 28, 2006 16:17:46 GMT -4
I'm trying to imagine how she'd tell him the news, and can come up with two possibilities. Either after a quiet dinner at home or just blurting it out. Or, knowing Egon, he finds out WITH her during a visit to the doctor's office.
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Post by ghostdiva on Jan 28, 2006 16:27:33 GMT -4
Alright Miss Janine, we're drifting into our previous conversation again! lol
I actually have a theory about this. It involves a PKE meter, PM me if you're interested (That's anyone not just Miss Janine)
After reading "Forever" agiain, I have another question. It seems that a few things may have been hints about future stories, such as the coment about a conversation between Kylie and Eduardo, for instance, anyone else notice? ghostdiva
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Post by EGBFan on Jan 28, 2006 17:23:33 GMT -4
Well, as to the last point, I can help you there. The bit you mean refers to the events of Heads or Tails - already written, by me, you may have read it. Don't anyone comment on it here - I don't want to nick Fritz's spotlight - but since it's come up, I thought it'd be ok to post the link. As to the twins, and how they find out about the pregnancy, I think it's fairly rare for a woman not to find out until she's seen a doctor, isn't it? If Janine was displaying the symptoms, she'd do a home pregnancy test before worrying it was something else. Considering her age, I did wonder if the pregnancy was planned - but I guess we'll find out. I know Fritz has been planning this one for a while - he's probably had it all worked out for ages.
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Post by ghostdiva on Jan 28, 2006 17:27:40 GMT -4
Ah yes, I feel Fritz has it all worked out, and beautifully so if "Forever" is any indication. I must have missed that story EGBFan, I'll have to go read it. Sorry about that. Anyone else pay attention to the add banner at the top of the board, it usually links to ghostbusters and anime related items, so you know it pays attention to the board, now it links to wedding ring sales sites lol. It can read our fics aparently ghostdiva
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Post by Miss Janine on Jan 28, 2006 18:05:53 GMT -4
Something else I picked up on in my rereading- Egon and Janine's seemingly simultanious (sp?) statements that they'd lived without love for six years, and hated it more than they'd ever thought it possible. The wording was even exactly the same. Between that and their habit of finishing each other's sentences that Peter's commented on, it's no surprise at all to me how in tune with each other they are.
btw, ghostdiva, that caption cracks me up!!! I LOVE it!!!
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Post by ghostdiva on Jan 28, 2006 18:31:17 GMT -4
I love how they know what the other is gonna say, and that they adopt each others speach patterns, ah love. And Fritz wrote the caption. ghostdiva
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Post by ghostdiva on Jan 28, 2006 21:56:07 GMT -4
I also have to say that I am glad that in this story you can really see how much Egon has grown emotionally and how ready he is to be married, especially telling his mom that he would marry Janine with or without his fathers approval, and the fact that he was calm and ready during the ceremony, if Egon had been younger I imagine that his vows would have been something like, "I Egon take thee Janine to be my lawfully wedded husband" That would have been sad. So I just thought I'd comment on how well you illustrated that Egon had grown and he was ready for the day. ghostdiva
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Post by Miss Janine on Jan 29, 2006 5:37:54 GMT -4
And without his mom's approval, too, especially considering how close he is to his mom.
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