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Post by Fritz on Nov 20, 2005 10:06:26 GMT -4
Extreme Ghostbusters: Hearts In Eclipse, Part One1998--Timeline Year Sixteen Tensions are rising in GBCentral, as conflict begins to build between Team Extreme and their two newest members...and the return of a long-absent member of the supporting cast threatens to spread the tension into their predecessors' ranks.
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Post by Miss Janine on Nov 20, 2005 13:39:03 GMT -4
OOOOh, yeah, this is what I'm talkin' about! Now I need to find a safe place to hide, 'cuz I think ol' Pete's about to blow!
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Post by ghostdiva on Nov 21, 2005 0:40:53 GMT -4
Okay, I gonna hold my comments until the story develops a little further, but I've got a question. Are we gonna see the story were Egon gets hurt at the opera house? He's not gonna have any long term problems is he? I know Janine would be mad if he was never again quite as flexible as he used to be. Eagerly awaiting Part 2. ghostdiva
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Post by SuperStantzio on Nov 21, 2005 1:01:14 GMT -4
yeah that was great I can't wait for the next part. Good Job!
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Post by Fritz on Nov 21, 2005 9:42:14 GMT -4
Okay, I gonna hold my comments until the story develops a little further, but I've got a question. Are we gonna see the story were Egon gets hurt at the opera house? That story was written by Vincent Belmont, and is at Ghostbusters.net: archive.ghostbusters.net/fanfictiondetail/474/It isn't finished yet, and the version written there isn't 100% Timeline compatible, but basically for our purposes most of the story still happens, but in 1997 instead of 1996 At this point, it appears there's no appreciable problems with his, er, "flexibility"--they still go on to have those Twins, after all ;D
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Post by ghostdiva on Nov 21, 2005 15:10:36 GMT -4
Goes to read story... 3rd degree burns, poor Egon. Poor Janine. Poor everybody! That makes me kinda sad. ghostdiva
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Post by Fritz on Nov 21, 2005 17:19:59 GMT -4
It might also be that in "our" version, Egon doesn't get it quite as bad. He certainly spends a week or two in the hospital, but is not hurt as bad as in the version on GBN.
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Post by ghostdiva on Nov 21, 2005 17:30:23 GMT -4
Good. That makes me feel better, just something about the whole hey your hero isn't invincible thing kinda bites sometimes. Whatever happened to the ghost that when caught, all the bad stuff they did went back to normal. Someone should tell Vincent he has a confused reader that needs to see the end of the story. ghostdiva
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Post by Miss Janine on Nov 21, 2005 18:11:07 GMT -4
Does that mean there's another version out there? *asks clueless reader*
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Post by Fritz on Nov 22, 2005 10:17:14 GMT -4
Not yet, as far as I know. But maybe some day.
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Post by Fritz on Nov 27, 2005 10:27:13 GMT -4
Extreme Ghostbusters: Hearts In Eclipse, Part Two1998--Timeline Year Sixteen The simmering resentments explode as Roland Jackson and Vincent Belmont vie for control of the team, and Peter Venkman is uncovers a secret that his friends had kept from him for six years...in the aftermath, somebody undergoes a startling transformation...
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Post by Miss Janine on Nov 27, 2005 14:49:37 GMT -4
OK, I have a question. Which is the best place to post at regarding stories, here or the Omnibus board? I posted about this over there, and don't want to sound like a broken record by repeating the same post here. My really quick recap: ;D
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Post by Fritz on Nov 27, 2005 17:30:24 GMT -4
Well, it's really up to you--I post the links on three different boards on GB stories, five for the GBWC stories. Even with that I hardly get any comment any more--ANY and all are appreciated.
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Post by Miss Janine on Nov 27, 2005 18:59:29 GMT -4
OK, after re-reading...
Louis really needs a happy ending. Wish I could write well enough to give it to him (and I'm not even that fond of him. I hope he gets his butt pasted for what he just did to Janine and Egon...).
And the twist putting Winston and the Ibandi into it was brilliant. Love to see where this goes.
And I had a feeling that was how Peter would find out...
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Post by EGBFan on Nov 28, 2005 13:41:01 GMT -4
OK, after re-reading... Louis really needs a happy ending. Wish I could write well enough to give it to him. I agree with you, and I have sufficient confidence in my writing ability to put stories on the internet. I'll have to think about this...
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