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Post by Fritz on Aug 7, 2004 10:35:21 GMT -4
Ghostbusters West Coast: Curtain Call, Part OneApril 2004--Timeline Year 22 The Ravisher strikes again, and two Ghostbusters are helpless to stop him. Then a rainy evening gets weirder...as a pyramid appears in Central LA. Begins the climactic story arc that resolves the story begun by "Opening Night". And we promise, after this the team will not be the same.
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Post by Fritz on Aug 8, 2004 19:01:38 GMT -4
Note to self... "Fritz, start putting sex scenes in all of your stories. It seems to be the only way you can get any comment"  |
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Post by Jeremy Hicks on Aug 9, 2004 1:05:33 GMT -4
Nah, don't do that. Besides, everybody knows what's gonna happen between you and Chelsea so don't cheapen the experience. Oh, and really good start to Curtain Call.
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Post by Fritz on Aug 9, 2004 9:59:39 GMT -4
Lol...thanks, Jeremy. That comment of mine was based on "Zodiac Imperative Part 3", where I strongly imply Egon and Janine...y'know. And of course You Know Who started to flame me for it (despite the fact that on GBHQ I put up a little disclaimer: "EgonsBabe probably better not read this one")  |
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Post by Jeremy Hicks on Aug 10, 2004 22:09:54 GMT -4
Yeah, I read that thread. I thought you handled that part of 'Zodiac Imperitive' quite tastefully.
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raysgal
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Post by raysgal on Aug 14, 2004 13:03:16 GMT -4
Cupcakes!!! ;D I figured I go ahead and give this a read. Well, I happen to like it. Even being about another franchise. It happens to be very amusing, Fritz. I commend thee on more good work. I guess I'll say that I look forward to the next part.  And I can't say that I'm surprised that Peter would dye his hair. He is vain like that. |
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Post by Fritz on Aug 14, 2004 20:36:20 GMT -4
And I can't say that I'm surprised that Peter would dye his hair. He is vain like that. He is almost fifty in Timeline terms (October 25, 2004 to be exact), so aging is definitely starting to work on him. Not to say he isn't going to fight it kicking and screaming of course--like you said, he is vain like that... |
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Post by Silent Seraphim on Aug 15, 2004 12:21:01 GMT -4
Another great fic, Fritz! I love the reference to the 88mph comic, and 'Mood Slime', and like raysgal, I agree that it's just like Venkman to dye his hair at the first sign of grey.  This one looks like it's going to be a biggie, and I'm already curious to know how they are going to deal with the appearance of a pyramid in a park in Central LA, why Jeremy is appearing in John's strange, seemingly prophetic dreams, and how Venkman and the guys are going to deal with the Ravisher. A real action-packed fic. Great stuff! |
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Post by Fritz on Nov 27, 2004 11:16:04 GMT -4
Ghostbusters West Coast: Curtain Call, Part TwoThe West Coast Ghostbusters and Venkman enter the pyramid, and are forced to divide into three smaller teams to battle the Ravisher and the Geistimanns. Includes hot and heavy sex scenes!* * --Not really, but if it gets anyone to read it...
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Post by raysgal on Nov 28, 2004 11:57:29 GMT -4
Includes hot and heavy sex scenes!* *--Not really, but if it gets anyone to read it... I have to admit I feel somewhat responsible for this mostly because I said one thing that got Egonsbabe into the discussion about E/J. Anyway, I did enjoy this part immensely. The humor and characters are wonderful. I look forward to the next part. |
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Post by SuperStantzio on Dec 1, 2004 15:09:06 GMT -4
Wow that was pretty cool. I really enjoyed reading and Keep up the good work!
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Post by Fritz on Mar 11, 2005 12:16:13 GMT -4
Ghostbusters West Coast: Curtain Call, Part ThreeThe final showdown with the Ravisher and his master, Lord Atrocity. LaLlarona's prophesy is coming true...the brutal plan of the God of Death moves forward...and stopping it may require one man to make the ultimate sacrifice...
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Post by SuperStantzio on Mar 11, 2005 14:04:05 GMT -4
Hey that was a awesome ending to the story! Nice job. |
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Post by Fritz on Nov 3, 2005 10:21:03 GMT -4
Time to bump this one.
I liked the way this story turned out--the ending was everything I hoped it would be when I started this whole story...well, to be honest, it really began with "Opening Night"
Anyway, if you haven't looked at it in a while here it is.
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Post by Fritz on Sept 23, 2006 9:17:52 GMT -4
Another bump.
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