Yami Mirai
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Post by Yami Mirai on Jan 12, 2006 11:53:23 GMT -4
I planned out the story at work today and I'm ready to start it now. Maybe don't let your boss see this. Don't worry, it wasn't a full shift. I was called in for a couple of hours because the manager had to attend a seminar and they needed someone to finish off her shift until the other employee came in. The bosses were out anyway, and the place was practically dead, so I took that time to do an outline of the story. I wasn't ignoring my job. lol Understandable. If you're busy, you're busy. It can't be helped. Thanks. That's why I created Samantha. The poor guy's gotten a rotten end of the bargain, he deserves a break.
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Yami Mirai
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Post by Yami Mirai on Feb 1, 2006 18:29:31 GMT -4
Okay, I decided to flesh Samantha's character out a bit more and developed some of her personal history. Since I started this thread to introduce her character I'll post it here:
Born in Sydney, Nova Scotia to Dunstable Avery Jessome and Sylvia Mary (Walker) Jessome. Has an older brother, Gregory Ross Jessome. Her younger sister, Shirley May Jessome died of pneumonia at the age of 7. Because of this, Gregory became very protective of his remaining younger sister, and still tries to look out for her even now.
Her father was an English professor while her mother stayed home to take care of the kids. Her interest in books developed because her father always encouraged his children to read and wouldn't accept anything less than a high mark in English from either of them.
Samantha did very well in both English and History, both being her favourite subjects, though she found Science difficult and absolutely hated Gym.
She was always a shy child, preferring to keep to herself at school and home. Her cousin Celeste tried to get her to open up more, with little success. Celeste was the only kid Samantha felt comfortable around for a while, being family after all. Celeste would eat lunch with Samantha every day at school, and although she often tried to get Samantha to join the other kids at recess, Samantha usually chose to spend that time in the library, reading whatever she could.
When her sister died Samantha was devastated. During that time she met a new girl, Vivian, who became her friend and provided a shoulder to lean on when she was upset. Because of Celeste and Vivian Samantha was able to eventually accept Shirley's death and move on, though she never fully got over the pain. Samantha still maintains a friendship with Vivian, even though they live in two different countries. They even visit each other from time to time.
Samantha graduated from high school in 1982; studied to be a librarian in university, which pleased her parents. She worked part-time in the school's library to help pay her tuition. When she graduated Celeste (who had already moved to New York City by that time) invited Samantha to come stay with her for a while and work at a library in the city. With some urging from Vivian and Gregory (who both felt that she needed to expand her horizons) she accepted the offer and moved in with Celeste.
Once she had gotten settled in and saved up enough money, Samantha moved out on her own. She has stayed in the city ever since.
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Jason Knetge
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Post by Jason Knetge on Sept 26, 2006 16:14:45 GMT -4
I like the Idea of a woman for Louis. I wood have given him a hot lawyer just because no one wood suspect it .
Yami Mirai I think your's is more practical . I hope it's not to late to give sum in pout I see a problem in the foocher which is Louis still being in love with Janine and Dana . I think you shooed give Samantha one or two mental or physical traits that Janine and Dana have . This cooed men that Louis is just attracted to wimmen with thees attributes . you cooed all so give her or her family financial problems this cooed make Louis her nite in shining armer .
Wall wear on the subject making Louis happy I think we shooed give Louis back sum of hi's fame . Here's the pitch following the Chronicles of Gozer the Ghostbusters franchise being sooed agen but this time it not just new york it the hol U,S . Yes I know the Chronicles of Gozer hap ined in 2004 but sum time big Cort dates are pushed bake . The Ghostbusters hire a teem of lawyers as they're defense with Louis .
I know Louis wasn't much of a lawyer bake in the day but he's had 20 years to get better . think of it sins the Ghostbusters went international he's probably gone to bat in the courts for the Ghostbusters evre time so he wooed be Part of the defense.
The other lawyers drop out and Louis is left to go it alone.
Now I know a lot of you will say Louis is to much of a wimp . yes but in the Nightsquad story All Hell Breaks Loose . We see Louis get mad and it mad me thing that there's a sleeping giant in there sum ware .
The stress of such a big Case coses Louis to snap and Louis isn't a timid llawyer eny more but a legal juggernaut . And no I'm not saing to change him completely he's still the same old Louis we know and love in every day but in the courts he's a fores of naicher . Think of it if he can get the Ghostbusters off when the holl system against them . Pardon my French but he'd be one bad ass lawyer .
This cooed all so be a good opportunity for a lot of the GB non ghost enemy's to attack in court like peck or dweeb.
It cooed be fun to see Bo Holbrook , Fritz , Ben and Belmont to name a fuew act on the stand.
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Post by Fritz on Sept 26, 2006 21:24:43 GMT -4
Jason, did you actually see the story Yami Mirai was writing? She talks about it here: ectozone.proboards31.com/index.cgi?board=gbff&action=display&thread=1137615442(And Mirai...why haven't you posted in like six months? You hate Gemini Rising or something? ) As for your other thoughts about Louis, they're certainly interesting. I intentionally gave Louis a moment to roar in "All Hell Breaks Loose" and there may be another moment of non-wimpiness coming up.
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Post by SuperStantzio on Oct 11, 2006 14:48:50 GMT -4
When is this story that is going to completed? It has not been updated in like in months!
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