Post by SuperStantzio on Mar 16, 2007 1:14:12 GMT -4
Title: A Night Out Author: Shafarah White Beta: Susie Owens Disclaimer: I do not own the Real Ghostbusters or Elaine Furman. I only own Julianna and Carlton Stantz. Rating: Pg-13 kissing
One refrence to the RGB episode, "Slimer, is that you?"
It was a nice day and the guys just came back from a call. When they entered, Slimer greeted them.
"Eww gross, Slimer!" Peter yelled as Slimer slimed him good. Peter growled and chased him around the room.
Winston shook his head at the sight of them, "Do you think they will ever learn how to get along?" he asked, while grinning at Ray.
Ray only shrugged, "Who knows. But Peter does show his soft spot for Slimer every once in a while." He said smiling behind his mustache, Ray also recently grew his hair out a bit that some what resembles Ringo Starr of the Beatles. He also told those who didn't like his new look that he wasn't going to cut his hair or mustache at all. He was still the same after all those years of ghost busting. But Peter still told him that he looked like Mario from his game boy and started teasing Ray by calling him Mario.
Egon had gone downstairs to flush out the traps. Then he went to check on one of his mold experiments.
Janine was at her desk taking a break, filing her nails and chewing on some bubble gum while Peter was teasing her.
Finally Janine had enough, "Would you go away Dr. Venkman! I'm trying to do some more work!"
"You are? All I see you filing your nails, not paper and chewing gum. That's not work, Janine. And I'm not paying you to do that." Peter replied.
"You hardly pay me at all!" The short red-haired secretary complained.
"Come on, Janine, you know I was just teasing you." Peter said.
Janine shook her head and went back to filing her nails.
Everyone was relaxing and talking to each other. Since there were no more calls for the rest of the day.
After a while, Ray stood up to get ready to go home, "Hey, I'm going home now because I promised Elaine that I'll take her out to dinner tonight. See you all later,” he said as he headed out the door.
The guys and Janine all told Ray good night, while Slimer was watching Ray depart.
"Goodnight, Ray." he said, while giving him a slimy hug.
Ray smiled, "See you later, Slimer." Then he got into his car and pulled off.
After Ray pulled up in his driveway and got out of his car, he went inside and saw his son and daughter watching Willy Wonka and the Chocolate Factory on the DVD player with Fluffy sitting next to them cleaning herself. Ray smiled at his kids as they were watching the movie and he sat down next to them and reached over to pet Fluffy.
"Hey kids, how was your day? And where's your Mom?" he asked, while smiling at them.
CJ looked over at him and replied, "Our day went well. Mom took us to the art museum, which was great. Then after that, we went to the comic book store. We brought ourselves some Captain Steel comics."
"Really?" Ray asked, still smiling.
Jules nodded, "Yes we did, Daddy. We collected six of them so far. So we're building up our collection very well. We may even catch up with you."
"That's awesome!" Ray replied, "You guys should show me sometime. So where's your Mom?"
"She's upstairs getting ready and she's waiting for you." CJ answered.
Ray thanked his kids and headed upstairs to find Elaine. She was in their room getting ready for the night out.
Ray walked in slowly and went behind her putting his hands on her waist and started kissing her on the back of her neck.
Elaine started giggling when she felt Ray kissing her neck, then she turned around.
"Hi sweetie, how was your day?" she asked smiling at her husband, giving him a kiss in return.
Ray replied, "It was great. We only had like two calls those were very easy and we just chatted for the rest of the day. What about yours, sweetheart?"
Elaine said, "Well, I had the day off. So the kids and I went to the art museum and we stayed there for a while, we had a blast. After that, we went to Wendy's for lunch and went to Mike's Comic Book shop. And then we came home."
"Hmm, that was the kids told me. Nothing new, huh? Well, maybe I'll just go back to the firehouse." Ray smiled and winked at her and she knew he was teasing her.
"Oh, you." she said with a smile on her own and then she looked at the clock, "Ray honey, it's almost seven-thirty so you better get in the shower. We don't want to be late."
Ray nodded and then he headed in the shower.
As he went in, he called back, "I love you."
"I love you, too."
"I need you to scrub my back."
Elaine laughed, "I'll be in later."
"I'll hold you to that."
"Take your shower."
A while later, Ray and Elaine finished getting dressed to go out. Elaine was wearing a dark blue dress with no sleeves and it came down to her knees. Her hair was done up in a ponytail and she was wearing some eye shadow and on her lips, she was wearing some cherry red lipstick that lasts all day. Ray was decked out in a nice dress shirt with some black slacks.
"Are you ready, darling?" Elaine asked, as she linked her arm into her husband.
"Yes I am, my lady. I'm taking you to the Touch of Romance restaurant. They have good food and they have dancing as well. So we better leave now!" Ray said romantically, as he carried his wife down the stairs while Elaine started giggling.
CJ looked at Jules, "Does Mom ever walk? Sheesh! They have been married for how long?"
Jules shook her head, "Boys. Come on CJ, they're still in love. I hope when I get married, me and my husband will still be in love like that."
Then after they gave the kids instructions for the evening, Ray gave them the number on where they're going to be; the number to the firehouse; and their cell phone numbers.
CJ and Jules both hugged their parents saying that they would be fine and have a good time. Ray and Elaine smiled at them and told them to be careful and they'll be back at 11:30.
At the restaurant, Ray and Elaine were enjoying themselves. It had been a wonderful evening for the both of them; Elaine had ordered a pot roast meal with all the trimmings with a salad and a roll, while Ray had a steak dinner. And for dessert, they both had a chocolate brownie with vanilla ice cream in top. Then after they had eaten; they had some champagne while waiting for the music to start. They were chatting for the moment. Ray was telling Elaine about the time Egon and Slimer had switched bodies for the day and what happened afterward, Elaine was laughing.
"So Egon was embarrassed after that?" Elaine asked.
Ray nodded while smiling, "He was for the moment, and then he tricked us. To say for the least, we avoided him for the next two days. And we never mentioned it again."
They both started laughing about it again, until the DJ had announced it was time for the dance. Most of the crowd got up immediately including Ray and Elaine. They danced a lot to the good songs. Then they started slow dancing. Elaine put her arms around Ray's neck while Ray put his hands on her backside as he moved her slowly to "Your Secret Love" by Luther Vandross. As they were dancing, Elaine whispered softly, "This is so romantic. It's one of my favorite classic songs. You're so wonderful to me, Raymond. I love you." She looked into his brown eyes and gave him a deep kiss.
Ray was blushing and grinning as he nodded in agreement as they danced slowly across the floor, "Yeah it is, baby." he replied, as he also looked into Elaine's beautiful hazel eyes as they continued dancing.
Then the music ended and Ray said, "I'm going to check on the kids to see how they are doing."
She nodded, as he went out in the waiting area to use his cell phone. A while later, Ray came back and Elaine was waiting for him, "How's CJ and Jules?" she asked.
Ray replied, " Jules said that they were finishing up the kitchen after they ate and locked the door like we told them. Then CJ said they are reading their comics and playing with Fluffy. They are doing well and I told them to be careful and don't let anyone in and we might be home late." he smiled. "Do you want to dance some more, Baby Doll?" he asked his wife.
"Yes. I would love, too." Elaine replied, as she came closer to Ray and he placed his hands back on her backside while she put her arms around his neck again and they were back on the floor dancing to the song, "Lady in my Life" by Michael Jackson.
They were having a very wonderful evening; Elaine was also having a very lovely time as Ray was holding her. She smiled lovingly at him, "This is so romantic. The food was awesome, the waiters were friendly and dancing included. Thank you, sweetheart." she said, as she kissed her husband again.
Ray smiled while he had some lipstick on his lips, "You're welcome." he replied, "You know that you're the most beautiful woman. I love your smile, your beauty, and your sense of humor. I love you, Elaine Caroline Stantz." He then kissed her passionately.
Elaine smiled back, "I love you too, Raymond Francis Stantz." Then the couple continued dancing until 1:30 and the restaurant was about to close, Ray paid the bill and left a nice tip for the waiter. They were very happy and relaxed, but it was time to go. Ray and Elaine headed out and got in the car. Later, they pulled up in their driveway and went inside their home. They checked to make sure that everything was in tact, then Ray called softly, "CJ, Jules, we're home."
But there was no answer, Elaine said, "I think the kids went to bed, so let's go check on them." and they both headed upstairs. They went into Jules' room and saw Jules in her bed sleeping contently while Fluffy was lying right next to her. Ray and Elaine couldn't help but smile at their daughter; she looked so cute sleeping with Fluffy. They went over, Elaine kissed her cheek and whispered, "Good night, Sweetie." while Ray ruffled her hair. He also kissed her good night.
"We'll see you in the morning." he also whispered as they walked out quietly out of her room. They did the same thing for CJ. They both went into their room and Elaine said, "That was so nice, Ray. We're going to have to do this again sometime. Didn't CJ and Jules did a great job?" she smiled.
Ray nodded in agreement while grinning at his wife, "Yeah, I'm glad that you enjoyed it. I agree, let's spend another romantic evening out together soon."
Elaine gave him another kiss. Only this time, it was deep and passionate. "You got it, Tiger."
Ray blushed at being called tiger and Elaine kissed him again.
Soon they had changed out of their clothes and put on their pjs and climbed in the bed for the night. Ray reached over and pulled Elaine to his chest and they wrapped their arms around each other. As they both fell asleep, each has a breath-taking smile on their face.
"Bart Bucks" are not legal tender. Goldfish don't bounce. I will not mess with the opening credits.
Post by SuperStantzio on Mar 25, 2007 20:55:26 GMT -4
Title: Library Ghost Rating: Pg-13 some swearing and fondling occurs Disclaimer: I don't own the Real Ghostbusters or Elaine Furman. I only own CJ and Jules. Beta: Susie Owens Author: Shafarah White
It was a nice day as the guys pulled in front of Carr's Computer Store. The guys had gotten a call from Mr. Edwards saying that he saw two ghosts. They were causing trouble in the place, throwing computer parts and other stuff as well. He came out looking very scared, "Help! I have two ghosts in my store. They're scaring off my costumers, throwing parts at everyone and generally just being a nuisance. Please get them out of there!"
Winston reassured the man, "Don't worry, we'll have this under control." as the others went into the store.
Once they were inside, the guys started looking for the troublesome ghosts. They had done this for a while, when suddenly the P.K.E. meter started beeping wildly.
"Do you have anything, Big Guy?" Winston asked.
Egon nodded, "Hmm, these ghosts are around a class-7."
Then suddenly, they heard a loud noise down in the next room.
"Alright guys, let's kick some ghostly ass!" Peter yelled, as he loaded up his proton gun.
Ray smiled, "Wow, this is going to be great!" he said as they all started down the aisle to find and trap the ghosts. It had taken a long time to catch them since the ghosts wanted to play around. They threw things at the guys and stuck out their tongues.
Finally, the ghosts were cornered as they were getting tired. Egon yelled, "Throw out the trap, I think they are getting very tired!"
Ray had the trap all ready out and stepped on the petal to open it up. The trap pulled them in. The ghosts were hissing and snarling while being sucked into it. Then finally, they were inside and the guys came out of the store.
Mr. Edwards came over to them and asked, "Are they gone? I certainly do not want to see them ever again!"
Ray smiled at him, "You'll never have to see them anymore, and I assure you." He held up the trap.
They were paid for their services and left. After that, they headed back to the firehouse for a little break, since it was a long morning and it was early into the afternoon, so they might get another call. They were in the living room just relaxing and eating some lunch. As always, Slimer was trying to get something from Peter.
"This is mine, Slimer. So get lost!"
Ray scolded, "Peter!" Then he threw some scraps for Slimer who happily caught them.
"Thanks, Ray." Slimer bubbled.
They continued to relax for a little while, until Janine came in saying, "Hey guys, you have another call, It's from Elaine. She says there's a male ghost hanging around at the library and it's harassing people. It's trying to get her as well. She wants you to hurry."
"What's going on Raymond?" Egon asked, as he came up from the basement.
Ray answered, "We got trouble at the library, guys. Elaine called and said that there was a male ghost causing trouble and harassing the women in the library. So let's go, no one harasses my wife!"
As the guys headed back into Ecto, Janine called out, "Be careful, guys!"
Winston called back, "We will, Janine!" as they pulled out.
A little while later, the Ghostbusters pulled out in front of the public library, everyone was standing outside. The librarians made sure that everyone had gotten out.
Elaine came rushing into her husband's arms. "I'm so glad that you came."
Ray held her tightly, "Why wouldn't we come? It's our job."
"Oh Ray, it's so crazy in there! The ghost is throwing books, screaming and harassing women. He also tried to fondle some of us. So please get that thing out of there!" Elaine pleaded.
"Don't worry Elaine, we'll get him."
Ray continued to hold her, "Like I said before, it's going to be okay, sweetie. Now tell us where did you last saw the ghost?"
"It's on the first floor making a mess. He was also seen on the next floor. Please Ray, you and the guys be very careful." Elaine said softly, as she looked deeply into his eyes and kissed him tenderly on the lips.
Ray smiled as Peter shook his head and yelled, "Come on, let's bag this ghost!"
The guys went into the library. Once inside, they headed for the main part. They had their proton guns out and ready searching for the ghost. This was taking a very long time. This ghost was a clown and he was causing a lot of trouble. He was throwing books at the wall and knocking over chairs.
"Did something come on the P.K.E. meter yet?" Ray asked.
The guys were ready with their weapons and headed into the children's room. As they entered, they heard a loud noise as books and chairs were being thrown right at them. The P.K.E meter was beeping loudly and the point was going up.
"Gentlemen." Egon said, "This ghost is registering as a class-nine."
"A class nine?" Winston asked, "That's really dangerous."
Suddenly the ghost appeared. He was holding a book in his ghostly hands, he hurled it at the guys; hitting Ray on the head that caused him to say, "Damn it!"
Which caused the guys to stare at him, "Raymond Francis Stantz, after we get this ghost; I'm going to wash your mouth out with some soap!" Peter said, he was very shocked that Ray would swear.
Ray ignored him, "There he is guys, let's get him!" he yelled.
The guys had started chasing the ghost. He hissed and slimed them all with sticky gooey slime. Then he stuck out his tongue. He started yelling obscenities, while giving them the finger. "Ha, Ha, you can't get me!" He bragged, as he floated up the next floor.
"Boy, someone needs to teach him some matters." Ray said.
"Do you want to do it?" Winston asked.
"No. I think I'll stick to teaching Slimer." Ray answered, as the guys headed for the elevators.
Peter asked, "Man, don't this ghost ever give up?"
"I'm afraid not, Peter, he's a little tough to catch. Remember, he is a class-nine so this could take a long time." Egon replied, as they reached the second floor of the library. They now had to look for the ghost to see where he disappears this time.
They split up in different directions. Ray decided to return to the children's area just in case the ghost had came back. While he was searching, he slipped on a toy and almost fell. He picked up the toy and laid it on the table, then continued to search. Suddenly, the ghost appeared again. This time, his ghostly hands were yanking Ray's hair and his mustache.
"Ouch! Let go!"
Then the ghost had stuck out his tongue again and floated away while Ray was following him. Ray met the others back on the first floor catching his breath. "Guys, this ghost won't just give up."
"Now where is he?" Winston asked.
Then suddenly, there was loud screaming coming outside as the guys ran back out. The ghost had started to bother the people again and this time, he had a hostage with him; it was Elaine. The ghost had her arm twisted behind her back while Elaine cried out in pain.
Ray was seething in anger, Winston held him back saying, "Easy, Ray."
"Let go of my wife, you bastard!" he yelled. But the ghost hissed, letting go of her arm. Then he started fondling her chest that caused Elaine to scream. The ghost suddenly let her go as Egon who had come behind him, while Peter had gotten out the trap blasted him.
Elaine pulled loose from the ghost, which was a good thing; she could've been burnt. The ghost screamed and snarled while he was being sucked into the trap.
Ray caught her in his arms before she landed on the ground and asked, "Are you okay, Elaine? Here, let me check to make sure that you were not burned."
She nodded, "Yes. Thanks to my loving hero. I'm fine, not a scratch." Elaine then placed her arms around Ray and gave him a huge kiss that made him start blushing profusely.
The others came up quietly towards them with the trap. "Hey, we got the ghost trapped, I just hope we won't have to see this ugly mug for a long time!" Winston said.
Ray nodded, "Good! That will teach him not to harass my wife or any woman!" he replied, with a little anger to his voice while still holding on to Elaine.
The librarians thanked them for their services and paid them. Elaine decided to take two days off. Later at the firehouse, the guys were just relaxing after a long day of calls; Ray was putting the ghost away in the containment unit and showing CJ and Jules how it was done. They were looking very curious.
"Now, after the light is green, that means its clean." he explained, after he had finished emptying the trap.
"Aw, cool." CJ said.
"Yeah, Daddy. That was neat." Jules replied.
"Hey, we're getting ready to go home it has been a tiring day, So good night, guys!" He called out, as the Stantz family was leaving the firehouse.
"Good night, Tex. Oh Elaine, make sure you wash his mouth out with some soap as he was swearing today!" Peter called back, as they all said good night.
Elaine smiled. "Oh, I will." She kidded while Ray looked a little shocked. She laughed, as she ruffled her husband's hair and kissed his cheek. After that, the family got in the car and drove home.
Ha, "some swearing and fondling", I like your turn of phrase. ;D Aaaaanyway - there's something particularly scary about a ghost looking like a clown, I think, and I don't even have a problem with clowns (honest!).
Post by SuperStantzio on Mar 29, 2007 16:41:33 GMT -4
Title: Midnight Love Disclaimer: I don't own the Real Ghostbusters. They belong to their respective company. Author: Shafarah White Beta: Susie Owens Rating: PG-13
It was 11 o'clock at night after a long working day for Ray and Elaine. They both were watching TV in their living room in their nice Victorian house. They had been married for a while now and they loved each other very much. Everyone said that they were made for each other.
They both were watching Beetle juice on HBO, laughing at the parts that were funny. During the movie, Elaine was leaning on Ray's chest contently while smiling at her husband. She thought to herself, 'I'm so lucky that we're married and I'm glad that I picked the right guy because I don't know what would've happen if I ended up with the wrong person.' Then she said, "Ray sweetheart, I'm going to the kitchen to get us some cookies and lemonade. Would you like some?"
Ray smiled at his wife, "Sure. I would love to have some." Elaine got up from the couch and went to the kitchen.
A few minutes later, she came back.
"Ray, we're out of Chips Deluxe, so I'm going to the store to get some more." she replied, while grabbing her car keys off the counter.
Ray went up to her and took her hand, "No sweetheart. We'll both go and I don't want you driving there by yourself at this time at night." Elaine nodded as they had their arms around each other; they both went out the door.
After they came out of the store, Ray and Elaine headed back out to the car holding each other's hand with the bag of cookies in Elaine's other hand. They drove back home, it was only 12 am since they were at the store for a little while and it took a half hour to get home.
After going inside, they decided to watch another movie while they shared the Chips Deluxe they had brought along with the lemonade.
Elaine placed her head back on Ray's chest saying, "You know darling, we should do this more often. I mean it's quiet and romantic and it gives us a chance to unwind after a very long day from our jobs. Plus, I do want to have children one day as well, because I just love kids. When I was younger, I used to baby-sit a lot and everyone liked my services and told me one day I'll make a great housewife and mother one day. What about you, Ray?" she asked smiling at him.
Ray smiled back while stroking his wife's dark hair, "Yeah that would be wonderful, I do want to be a dad, because I want my kids to have the best childhood and never go through the things I went when I was younger."
After a while, the movie was over; Ray and Elaine were tired. Ray slowly got off the couch. He looked down at Elaine, "Are you ready for bed?" he asked, as he held out his hand.
She slowly got up and took his hand smiling at him. And together they went into their bedroom. Elaine got undressed and laid on the bed watching her husband. She watched him peel off his shirt; she wasn't surprised to see that he had some muscles.
After all, he did carried around a heavy pack. Ray climbed in the bed, "Are you sure you want to do this, Elaine?" he asked in a gentle voice.
"Yes," she breathed.
"I'll be gentle. If I hurt you, please let me know."
Elaine took a deep breath and nodded, Ray did his magic on her. She moaned and groaned with pleasure. Her body jerked, and Ray suddenly stopped.
"Am I hurting you?" he asked in a concerned voice, "Do you want me to stop?"
Ray smiled and returned making love to her. They made love until they both were tired. Then they lay in each other's arms neither knowing nor caring where one began and the other began.
Before they closed their eyes, Elaine whispered to Ray, "I love you honey, see you in the morning." she smiled, while they gave each other a good night kiss. Ray smiled back, "I love you too, Sweetie. Good Night." Then they fell asleep.
"Bart Bucks" are not legal tender. Goldfish don't bounce. I will not mess with the opening credits.
Post by SuperStantzio on Apr 4, 2007 1:55:01 GMT -4
Title: Skating Party Author: Shafarah White Beta: Susie Owens Disclaimer: I don't own the Real Ghostbusters or Elaine Furman. Only Julianna Raelynn and Carlton James I own. Copyright:2005-2007
Ecto had pulled up at the skating rink; the guys had received a call from the owner, Mr. Jones. He told them that he had a ghost inside the rink that was causing a lot of trouble. He told his employers to make sure that everyone was outside after everyone was safe, he ran up towards the guys.
"Hurry! It's inside and it's causing a lot of trouble. I'm having a big skating party tonight." he said, his voice was crackling and he was scared.
"Not to worry sir, you've called the right people and we'll get the ghost out of there." Ray replied as his eyes lit up like fireworks and he placed his thrower in his hand ready to have fun.
The guys headed inside. As soon as they were inside, they started searching the whole area, Egon looked at the PKE meter. "Gentlemen, this might be a tough one; this ghost is in the range of a class 7." he said.
"Well, that's not too bad." Peter said sarcastically, "I thought it would be a class 15." The others gave him a look as they kept on walking down the area.
Suddenly, they heard a loud noise coming from the game room. They ran in and saw the ghost who just having itself a good time and causing a lot of trouble.
Peter had started up his proton gun, "Come on guys, and let’s get that sucker."
They chased the ghost. It was going to take a while to catch since it was a class 7.
"Ray, you take the south side, Egon, the north side, Winston, the east side and I'll come on the west side!" Peter shouted over the noise of the ghost was making. Once they were in position, Peter shouted, "Now! Let's bag this bugger so we can go home!"
The ghost was a show off; he had no fear of the Ghostbusters at all. He stuck his tongue out at them managing to avoid their rays.
"He's going to get careless!" Winston shouted and sure enough, he did. Peter and Ray had him in their beams. Winston threw out the trap and stepped on it, sucking the screaming ghost in, finally he was caught. The guys headed out the rink to a crowd of cheering people. Mr. Jones ran over to them.
"Did you get it? Is it gone?"
Ray smiled and showed him the blinking trap. "Best fun I had all day."
The guys pulled up after a long afternoon. The guys were a bit messy, but sane enough.
Ray said, "Boy, those were some long calls, but they were great." he smiled.
Egon went downstairs to empty the traps. Peter was taking off his jumper, "Yeah, those maybe enjoyable to you Tex, I'm just a little tired from chasing all the spooks. I just want to crash on the couch."
Winston nodded in agreement, "Yeah, I have to agree with that, man. Hey, where are CJ and Jules at?"
"They should be at home, school just let out. I can't believe it. They're growing up so fast, in the sixth grade already, plus they told me that they're going to a skating party tonight at the place that we did the bust earlier today. It's starts at 6:30 tonight. I told them to have fun and be careful. Elaine and I may go, too. If we don't get too many calls. I hope we don't. Elaine told me to call if we're going." Ray replied.
"That sounds great and I used to go skating a lot when I was younger." Winston said. The others nodded in agreement.
A few minutes later, Egon came back up from emptying the traps. "Hey Egon, in a little while we're going back to the skating rink, they're having a party there. Are you going to invite Janine?" Peter asked, giving him a wink.
Egon blushed for a moment then replied calmly, "Of course I am, Peter."
"This is going to be great. I told Elaine about it and she's excited as well." Ray said. "We have to wait for her, she said she might be a little late getting off work." He added. "The kids told me, it starts at 6:30 and ends around at 11:30."
A couple hours later, everyone was all cleaned up and ready to go. Elaine was there as well; she got off a little early. She also couldn't wait to skate on the floor and have a great time. "Hey Ray, remember when we used to skate a lot back in Morrisville?" she asked, as she pinched her husband on the cheek playfully.
Ray blushed and smiled, "Yes, I remember."
Soon the guys, Janine and Elaine were ready to go. They all headed out.
At the rink, the kids were having a great time. They all saw their friends at school; CJ was hanging with his friends, Jason and Ronnie as they skated around the rink. Soon they decided to take a break at the refreshment bar getting something to eat.
Jules was talking to her new friend, Nicole as they were laughing together until Charlie and another boy named Chris asked them to skate with them. They both accepted.
CJ was talking to his friends, "This party is awesome so far! What do you guys think?"
Ronnie and Jason both nodded in agreement. "Yeah it is. They did a great job decorating this place up and they play good music." Ronnie replied.
"Yeah! And only the Ghostbusters to watch us." Jason added as the boys laughed together. "When they get here."
On the rink, Jules was holding Charlie's hand while they were skating around, while Nicole was holding Chris’; they were laughing and having a blast. "Hey, isn't this party great?" Nicole asked as they continued to skate.
Jules nodded, "It is and I'm glad that I have a partner to skate with. Right, Charlie?" She gave Charlie a beautiful smile that made him blush. Charlie smiled back at her.
"Yes, and I'm also glad that I have you for a skating partner, too."
Just then, the guys, Janine and Elaine walked in, they all paid for the skates. They took off their shoes and put them on. "This place looks great!" Ray declared. He then stood up and skated around.
"I agree. I can't wait to get on the rink." Winston agreed as he also skated.
Elaine smiled as she and Janine noticed Jules skating with Charlie holding each other's hand. "Awe, isn't that cute." Janine said.
Elaine who was still smiling, nodded, "Yes it is. Oh Janine, my baby girl's growing up."
Winston and Ray were also looking at Jules and Charlie. "Hey, they look so cute together. I really think that they like each other." Winston said, grinning at Ray.
Ray nodded his head as he watched them closely. "Yeah, but Jules is still not dating yet."
"Come on, guys. We don't want Ray and Winston to have all the fun; let's get on the rink." Peter said as the rest nodded and skated out on the rink.
The kids were having fun skating. CJ and his friends got back in to skate some more, as they were skating; they saw Peter and Winston skating right past them.
"Hey, kids!" Peter called.
Janine and Egon were skating together along with Ray and Elaine who had their arms around each other.
"Isn't this fun, sweetheart?" Ray smiled at his wife.
Elaine smiled back, "Yes, it is and I always thought that you were a great skater."
She said that caused Ray to turn a deep shade of red, while Elaine leaned over and kissed her husband on the cheek. Jules and Charlie continued to skate. Nicole and Chris decided to take a break. Once alone; Charlie said, "You're a great skater, Jules."
Jules smiled. "Thanks."
Charlie held her hand and squeezed it, "I like your personality, and you’re a very sweet girl." He smiled, and then he leaned forward and kissed Jules on the lips that made her blush. Elaine and Janine were near by and noticed.
"Awe, there goes my daughter getting her first kiss." Elaine said proudly.
Janine agreed smiling, "Yeah, and she looks so happy. I wondered what's Ray going to say."
"Oh, I can tell you what he'll say." Elaine clears her voice sounding a little like Ray. "Young lady, you're not dating until you're 16 no wait, 50 years old."
Both Elaine and Janine started giggling like teenagers. Jules skated over to them.
She had a love struck smile on her face, "Hi Mom, Aunt Janine." Jules replied.
Elaine smiled back, "Hi sweetie, that was so cute when Charlie kissed you. Did you enjoy it?"
Jules blushed a little, "Yes. I really do like him. I wonder what Daddy have to say about that."
Janine smiled at her, "Don't worry. Your father knows that you're growing up, he shouldn't be too overprotective of you."
Ray and the guys skated over to where Elaine, Janine and Jules were.
Winston noticed the smile on Jules' face, "Hey Jules, we also saw you getting that kiss from Charlie. So have you gotten a little boyfriend?” He winked at her.
Jules blushed again, "No, not yet. But I hope soon."
Ray looked at her sadly, "I think you're growing up too fast on me."
Jules smiled and gave her father a kiss, "Don't worry, Daddy. I'll always be your little girl."
Ray smiled and hugged his daughter, "I know, pumpkin." he said.
"You're blossoming into a young lady, where does the time go?"
The group decided to take a break from skating for a while, and went in the game room. Jules, after telling good-bye to her parents, headed back to her friends.
In the game room, the guys were playing a couple of games while Janine managed to get Egon in the photo booth. Peter was at the prize booth window flirting with one of the female workers, who was tall and blonde.
"Hey, how about we leave this dump and go somewhere more romantic?"
"Why don't you just go away before my boyfriend finds out." she replied.
Peter walked away, "Oh well, maybe next time."
Ray and Elaine were counting up their tickets so they can trade them in for prizes. They were all having a great time.
Elaine smiled while wiggling her finger towards Ray, "Come on Ray, let's go in the photo booth." Ray also smiled, "Sure Elaine, let's go." he said, as they walked over to the booth and stepped inside.
At the game room, everyone was having a lovely time; even the kids came in and played some games for a while. Winston and Peter were playing the skeet ball game trying to win some more tickets as they already had a lot to trade in for prizes, While Egon and Janine were skating around, just talking. Soon, they were getting hungry so they went to the snack bar to get something to eat.
CJ and Jules were playing the whack a mole game. Jules beaten CJ by a couple of points, "Hey no fair, you cheated." CJ said.
"No, I didn't, CJ. You're just jealous because I'm better than you at this."
They continued playing until the game was over, and they both won tickets. Ray and Elaine had came out of the photo booth, they both were laughing and their hair was a little wild and Ray had a couple of lipstick prints on his face. "Oh look Elaine, they have the skeet ball game. I've got to play that and they also have the whack a mole game as well. Come on, let's play them."
Elaine laughed again, "Sure."
"Hey! The photo booth is for taking pictures, not kissing. Leave it at home." Peter said.
"Oh hush, Peter." Ray said as he stuck out his tongue. Then he went to play skeet ball with Elaine. Peter returned the gesture as he went somewhere else to play a game. They were in the game room for a while and they all traded their tickets for prizes.
Then the DJ started to play some slow tunes and everyone decided to go back out into the rink, Charlie came back over to Jules and took her hand again as they skated around again smiling at each other. The guys all had partners for the slow tune skating and even Peter managed to find a girl that had red hair and was tall to skate with him.
The others were also skating slowly to the slow tunes. Egon and Janine had decided that they had enough skating for one night, so they headed off the rink. Once off, they put their shoes on and just watched the others.
"Wasn't this party great?" Janine asked Egon.
Egon nodded, "Yes, indeed it was. I never knew that you could skate that well, Janine."
Janine blushed and smiled, "Thank you, Egon." They continued to watch everyone else.
CJ and his friends were watching Jules having a great time skating with her friends.
"Hey, it looks like Jules is really enjoying herself. She's even holding hands with Charlie." Ronnie said as they continued to watch her and Charlie skate.
CJ nodded his head and replied, "That's true. I really think that she likes him. I know what Dad would say about her having a boyfriend this early."
Jason and Ronnie both nodded in agreement. They both had sisters and knew how fathers could be.
Meanwhile, Peter and Winston were enjoying themselves with their lady partners that they had invited to skate with them. Ray and Elaine had just got back on the rink after eating some food. Elaine almost slipped on the floor; but before she fell, Ray grabbed her.
"Are you okay, Elaine?"
"Yes. Thanks to my hero."
Ray's face turned a bright shade of red as Elaine reached over and kissed him.
Jules was saying good-bye to Nicole who was going home. Then she and Charlie were skating again.
Ray shook his head and said, "You know Elaine? I think I'm going to keep a eye on Jules a little longer, she's growing up too fast for us."
Elaine nodded, "I know Ray, she's just growing up. CJ is too. You've got to lighten up. It was her first kiss. Please promise me that you won't spy on her. She's got a good head on her shoulders."
Ray pulled Elaine to his side. "Yes, I know she is. After all, look who her parents are."
Elaine nodded as they saw Charlie give her another kiss.
"Your parents are watching us again."
"I know. Don't worry Charlie, they like you."
"Then why is your father giving me that look?"
Jules looks over and see her father half smiling and half grinning. "Oh, that's just mean that he likes you a lot."
"I hate to see what he looks like when he doesn't like someone." Charlie said.
"Never mind. Just kiss me again."
Charlie smiled as he took her in his arms and kissed her again. Then he handed Jules a gift-wrapped in pink paper. "Here Jules, I won this for you. The clerk wrapped it for me." he said.
Jules took it. She opened it carefully and saw that it was a stuffed heart that said I'm crazy about you.
Jules laughed, "This is so cute. Thank you, Charlie." She gave him a kiss that had left a red lip-gloss print and made him blush.
Everyone who had seen this had started oohing loudly, Jules and Charlie ignored them. Instead Charlie smiled, and then said, "You're welcome."
Then it was 11:00 pm. The party was almost over, so everyone decided to head off the floor to get ready to go home. Everyone headed out the place talking about how much fun they had.
"Wasn't the party great?" Peter asked. He had an enjoyable time as he had gotten the lady who he was skating with her phone number.
Everyone nodded in agreement. Elaine smiled, "Yes, that was wonderful. I really had a lovely time and I had a great skater with me. Right, Ray?" she asked, while batting her eyelashes at her husband.
Ray felt himself blushing again, "Oh yes. It was enjoyable."
He smiled as he pulled his wife closer to his side and planted a kiss on her cheek, holding her hand.
Then he turned to his kids, "Did you guys have fun?"
CJ and Jules both nodded.
"It was awesome, that was the best party ever!" CJ confirmed. “I see that you really enjoyed yourself, Jules. I also saw you kissing Charlie as well." he grinned at his sister, giving her a wink.
Jules smiled and blushed, "It was excellent. Yes, I'm still thinking about that kiss Charlie gave me." She smiled again as she was looking at the stuffed heart Charlie had won for her.
Janine and Elaine both smiled at her, "That is really cute, Jules. I think he really cares about you." Janine said.
Elaine also agreed, "Yeah he does, that was so sweet of him." She replied to her daughter.
"But remember Jules, you're only 11. You can be friends with Charlie, but no going steady till you're 16."
"I know." Jules said.
They all said good-bye. Then they went their separate ways. The guys went back to the firehouse, while Ray and his family went home. It has been a wonderful evening and they would do this again real soon.
"Bart Bucks" are not legal tender. Goldfish don't bounce. I will not mess with the opening credits.
Post by SuperStantzio on Jun 7, 2007 16:48:59 GMT -4
Title: Bowling Night Author: Shafarah White Beta: Susie Owens Rating: G Disclaimer: I don't own the Real Ghostbusters or Elaine Furman. I only own Julianna Raelynn and Carlton James.
It had been a quiet morning at Ghostbusters Central. The guys were sitting around and Ray's been bragging about CJ's science project for the science fair.
"I'm telling you guys. He's going to win first place; he's a chip off the old block."
Suddenly Janine peeked her head in the doorway. "You have got a call from Mr. Johnson, owner of Johnson's Ice Cream Parlor. He says weird things has been happening and he wants you there ASAP."
The guys soon pulled up in front of Johnson's Ice Cream Parlor, the owner Mr. Johnson came over to them saying, "There are two ghosts in my store and they are scaring my customers and making a big mess. Please get them out of there."
The guys nodded as they can tell he was scared, Egon took him aside and said, "Not to worry sir, we will have the ghosts trapped and out of your hair."
Mr. Johnson made sure everyone was outside and safe while the guys headed inside to see what was the problem. They were searching around the place, Egon noticed his PKE meter was beeping, and He watched the needle go across the window. "Gentlemen, this maybe a tough one, these ghosts are around a class 5."
"Now what? Why can't they be around a class nine?" Peter grumbled.
Everyone glanced at him for a moment as they continued the bust. Just then, they heard a loud noise in the back room; it was the two ghosts that were causing trouble. They were throwing and eating ice cream all over the place.
Winston shouted, "There they are, let's get them!"
"Yeah, and boy they are ugly." Peter replied. One of the ghosts threw ice cream at Peter.
"Hey! Now you made me mad. I hate Maple Walnut. Like Winston said, my comrades; let's send these ghosts back to the freezer fired up."
The others nodded and went inside. The bust had taken a very long time because the ghosts didn't want to be trapped and they were throwing things at the guys, as one of the ghosts threw an ice cream scooper at Ray that caused him to yelp:
The ghosts had them all over the room. The Ghostbusters were trying to hit them with the beams. Peter noticed that the ghosts were getting tired, "Hey guys, I think they're getting tired."
The others nodded and three beams hit the two ghosts dead center. Peter threw down the trap and stepped on the pedal to open it up. The ghosts were shouting as they were being sucked in. Soon the trap was closed. It jumped for a few moments, and then became quiet. The guys came out with the ghosts in the trap, they were a little messy and sticky with ice cream and whipped cream. Mr. Johnson came over and asked, "Are they gone?"
Ray nodded as he was holding the smoking trap. "You don't have to worry about them anymore. This was great!"
He smiled, despite the bruising showing on his forehead. He gave them a check for their services and they went back to the firehouse.
After that, they had another call. The guys came back to the firehouse, tired and sticky. It had been a long morning and afternoon. As they got out of Ecto, they saw Janine and Elaine having one of their girl talks. Peter ignored the girls talking and turned to Egon.
"Those jobs were tiresome and long." He complained as he dragged himself over to Janine's desk. He placed the checks on her desk.
"Say Janine, be a nice girl and take these to the bank for us. I'm beat, I'm going to take a shower, then head for bed."
Egon shook his head as he headed downstairs to put the ghosts in the containment unit.
Janine watched as Peter headed upstairs. "Long day?" she asked.
Winston nodded, "It was, five ghosts in one day. We just want to relax."
Elaine walked over to Ray; she smiled and gave him a kiss. When she did, she noticed the bruise on his forehead. "What happened right there?" she asked.
Ray smiled back, "I was hit on the head by a ghost who threw a ice cream scooper when we did a bust at the ice cream parlor."
"It must've been some ice cream scooper." Elaine replied as she touched it.
"It was the super duper kind and it hurts terribly."
"Oh, my poor baby. Let me kiss it and make it better." Elaine planted a gentle kiss on Ray's forehead.
Ray smiled again and said, "Stay right here, I'll be back. I got to clean myself up, I'm just a little sticky from the ice cream." Elaine nodded as he went upstairs to clean up.
A while later, the guys were all cleaned up. They were in the living room talking and eating some pizza that they had ordered. Peter, after taking a nap came and joined them.
"Hey, I hope you saved me some."
Ignoring Peter; Ray said, "Hey do you all want to go bowling tonight? It's from 7:30 till midnight. The kids are there. They asked if they could go. I said yes, since it ends late, we would be over later to take them home. Charlie's Dad gave them a ride there."
The guys all nodded.
"I can't wait to bowl. I'll beat all of you." Peter said, getting very excited.
Egon shook his head. "I've seen you bowl before Peter, this time please don't try to cheat." he replied.
Peter pretended to look hurt. "Me cheat? Come on Egon, you know I wouldn't cheat."
Winston also shook his head and grinned at him, "Yeah Pete, I know you. So don't even try."
Janine and Elaine also wanted to go as well, "That sounds great. I love to bowl."
Elaine turned to Janine, "What about you, Janine? Do you like to bowl?"
Janine shook her head, "I really don't know. I only did it a couple of times, that's it."
"Well, then you're in for a treat." Peter said, as he winked at Janine.
At 8:30, everyone headed out.
Meanwhile at Red Lanes Bowlers, the kids were bowling and having a great time. CJ, Ronnie and Jason were playing in lane No. 8. While Jules, Nicole and Charlie were playing in lane No. 9. They've been there for a while playing a friendly game. After each one played two games apiece, they decided to take a break to get something to eat.
As they were eating, they laughed and talked.
"Isn't this great?" Nicole asked.
"Yes, it's sure is. I can't wait to play against Dad and the others when they get here. It's going to be so neat." Jules replied while she grinned.
Ronnie looked over as he heard the main door opening. "It won't be long now, Jules. Here they come."
They looked over and saw CJ and Jules' parents with their friends. They were at the counter paying the admission and getting their shoes. A young lady was behind the shoe counter.
"What size?" she asked.
"I'll take a 11." Egon replied.
"I'll take a 9." Ray said.
"11 for me, too." Winston said.
"7 for me." Elaine said.
"I'll take an 8." Janine said.
"I'll take a size 9 and would you like to go out with me?"
The girl smiled at Peter. "Call me and I'll let you know."
Peter was about say something when he got interrupted.
"This is neat, I haven't been here for a long time. I can't wait to get on the floor and bowl." Winston said.
"I know, are we going to bowl or what. I don't want to be standing around, so let's go!" Peter replied a little annoyed at Winston for interrupting him when he was scoring. But no one noticed, instead they all nodded and headed to the lanes.
The kids got up from the snack table and started to bowl again. It was Jules' turn to bowl. She got up and took the ball out of the cradle. It was also Jason's turn to bowl in the eighth lane.
They both did a pose and let their balls go. Jules' ball hit all the pins getting a strike, while Jason's only knocked down 7 pins.
"Alright, Jules!" Nicole and Charlie cheered as she came back to them doing a little dance.
CJ and his friends also told her it was awesome.
Jules smiled and thanked them.
Then they heard some clapping and looked over to see the guys who had just seen the strike.
"Hey, that was great, Jules. So are you guys enjoying yourselves?" Ray asked.
The kids all nodded and CJ replied, "Yes. We're definitely having a good time."
"So did you guys just get here?" Ronnie asked.
Winston nodded, "Yes. So do you guys what to play against us? We're going to bowl in lanes 5 and 6, so let's play." The guys went down to those lanes and started to bowl as well.
Nicole grabbed Jules. "Come on, here's your chance to play against your dad.
Jules laughed as they all hurried over to lanes 5 and 6.
Once the kids joined them, they split into two teams: Winston, Egon, Elaine, Jules, Nicole and Charlie were playing on one team while Peter, Ray, Janine, CJ, Jason and Ronnie were the other team. Peter stood up with his ball. Winston got up for his team as well.
"Watch, I'm going to get a strike." Peter bragged as he walked up to the line, did a little dance then he sent his ball down the lane.
Winston shook his head as he let his ball go.
Their balls went rolling down the lanes. Then the sound of pins being knocked down came from lane six. Winston had gotten a strike. Peter's ball landed up in a gutter.
"Not fair, the lane was crooked."
"Peter, I think you're twisting your wrist, which is causing the ball to go in the gutter." Ray said, trying to be helpful.
"Yeah man, besides you get another turn. Just stop twisting your wrist."
"How do I do that?"
"By wearing a wrist-resistant band like Raymond is wearing,” replied Egon.
"Where do I get one?"
"I think they sell them at the counter." Janine said.
Peter went to the counter and purchased himself a wristband. After getting the counter girl's number, he returned. Placing on the wristband, he took his other turn. Then he and Winston returned to the floor with their balls. They both let their balls go. The balls rolled down the lane, Peter managed to hit the pins this time, knocking them all down this time, which gave him a spare.
Winston placed his hand on Peter's shoulder, "Way to go, my man."
Peter nodded, "At least the second time was better than nothing." He said as they went back to their own teams.
Ray and Elaine stepped up for it was their turn. They both had their balls ready.
"We'll see about that." Ray bragged to his wife, as they both sent their balls down the lane. They saw the pins get knocked down. Elaine got eight pins down, while Ray had only got two.
"Hey, that's not bad at all. At least I have eight, you only have two. Are you loosing your touch?" She teased playfully.
Ray shook his head. "No, I'm not and we have another turn, so there."
Then they sent their balls down the lane again, Elaine's ball knocked down only one pin while Ray's knocked down six. They shook hands then went back to their teams.
Elaine went back to her team with everyone cheering for her. "That was pretty good Mom." Jules said.
Elaine smiled, "Thanks, Jules."
Next it was Egon and Janine's turn to bowl. They both were in position and they then let their balls go. Janine's knocked down only four pins while Egon got eight.
"That was pretty good." Winston said to Egon, as he was getting ready to try and knock down the last two.
Janine also had to agree with that, "Wow Egon, I didn't know that you were that good. But I'm going to get the rest of my pins down as well."
Egon smiled before replying, "I did play a little bowling once as a experiment, but thanks."
They then returned to try and knock down the rest of the pins and they both did, give them both a spare.
A little while later, after everyone had their turns, they decided to take a little break. It was around 10:45 when the break ended so they decided to bowl another game. This time, it would be the boys against the girls.
The guys were back on the floor getting ready to bowl again. So it was Jules' turn as she got up with her ball she was playing against her Dad.
Ray was also stood ready with his ball.
"I'm going to get another strike." Jules bragged, as they both were in position as they let their balls go.
"I don't know about that, we'll just have to see. So don't get too cocky." Ray teased as they watched their balls. They watched as the balls rolled down the lanes hitting the pins that knocked down six pins for Jules and Ray's ball knocked down eight. They still had one more turn, so they were back in position. Together, they let their balls go.
They both got spares; Jules and Ray gave each other high fives and went back to their teams.
Next, it was CJ and Nicole's turn. So they had stepped up with their balls and let them go. Nicole got a strike, while CJ got a spare for the guys. Then they both went back to their teams. They all had fun, even the girl who Peter got his phone number from decided to join them, since she was now off.
This had lasted all evening. Finally, it was 11:50 and the bowling place was about to close in 10 minutes. The guys left to return the shoes.
"Wasn't this great?" Peter asked, as they were finishing putting on their regular shoes and headed out the door into the night.
"Yeah it was. I did enjoy bowling very much. We have to do this again real soon. Right Ray?" She asked, smiling her husband.
Ray smiled back, "Yes we do, it was fun."
He turned to the kids, "Hey, did you enjoy yourselves?"
All the kids nodded. They were very happy, but a little tired. It was too late for the Stanzes to go home. So everyone agreed that they might as well spend the night. So they all got into Ecto and drove to the firehouse for a good night's sleep knowing it had been a fun evening and they would came back again one day.
"Bart Bucks" are not legal tender. Goldfish don't bounce. I will not mess with the opening credits.