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Post by Fritz on Jan 22, 2007 9:52:05 GMT -4
Ghostbusters: Pandora's Box, Part OneOriginal Story by Barry Peterson Adapted by Fritz Baugh March 1991--Timeline Year 9 The Ghostbusters get a call from none other than the President: there's a pesky poltergeist perplexing the Pentagon. Beginning an adaptation of the final Now Comics serial, which was never finished. This oversight will be corrected in forthcoming chapters.
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Post by EGBFan on Jan 22, 2007 10:13:08 GMT -4
Early days on this one - this is rather an introductory chapter, and I have to say it bodes well for the rest of the story - great stuff. ;D
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Post by Miss Janine on Jan 22, 2007 12:08:51 GMT -4
This unfinished NOW story always bugged me, but now it looks like it's finally going to be finished. Lookin' really good so far...
Now to get to those other new stories. Real life tends to intrude, and it really stinks when that happens...
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Post by SuperStantzio on Jan 22, 2007 12:27:14 GMT -4
This is great! Keep the good work so far!
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Post by BlackMaria on Jan 22, 2007 13:45:34 GMT -4
Fritz, you're such a tease. Good start, I'm hooked.
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Post by Jason Knetge on Jan 23, 2007 5:00:42 GMT -4
I have one big problem with it I wont more MORE MORE come on man don't hould out on us We need our fix
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Post by Mick Nielson on Jan 23, 2007 11:47:42 GMT -4
Really enjoyed this one a lot Fritz, always enjoyed your NY team stories and I've been hoping for some new ones, strange as it may sound, the Mary Sue story you wrote kinda influenced that, haha. Also, its always nice to see people returning to the time period of during the movies, dont see much of that lately. Good work!
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Post by Fritz on Jan 23, 2007 18:46:22 GMT -4
Really enjoyed this one a lot Fritz, always enjoyed your NY team stories and I've been hoping for some new ones, strange as it may sound, the Mary Sue story you wrote kinda influenced that, haha. Also, its always nice to see people returning to the time period of during the movies, dont see much of that lately. Good work! I know I haven't done a lot of the "classic" era lately; I've been too busy exploring the current status quo (in the GBWC) and showing how that status quo got there (ie "Zodiac Imperative" "Forever" "Gemini Rising"). It is kind of fun, though I admit there aren't any ideas rolling around at the moment other than this one. And it probably helps that "Pandora's Box" does have some effect on some current concerns. It's not spoiling much to anyone who's read the Timeline or ECTO-1's Comicguide to say there's a familiar team of popular canon characters set to enter the narrative in part 2. Characters connected to concerns that recently touched the Present Day...
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Post by Fritz on Mar 12, 2007 9:09:36 GMT -4
Ghostbusters: Pandora's Box, Part TwoStory by Barry Peterson; Adapted by Fritz Baugh 1991--Timeline Year Nine To unravel the mystery of the disappearance of Professor Ian Epimetheus, Egon and Venkman enter the lost scientist's experiemental portal...and come across even more mysteries, culminating in the return of some very familiar adversaries... And if you want a spoiler: It's these guys
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Post by SuperStantzio on Mar 12, 2007 12:55:29 GMT -4
I gotta commend you, Fritz you had the second part awesome! Wow Ray can swear really good when he's provoked and he's using the F-bomb, too. Nice Job!
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Post by Fritz on Mar 12, 2007 13:06:21 GMT -4
As I see it, Ray knows all those words and how to use them, and to suggest that he doesn't is dishonest. He certainly doesn't cuss as much as Venkman or Janine, or maybe even ex-soldier Winston, but he's an adult in a sometimes intense line of work. Egon's the only one for whom using those words generally means the world is ending.
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Post by SuperStantzio on Mar 12, 2007 13:11:28 GMT -4
That's true, In my fics when I do have Ray swear, He does use them in discrection and when the time is need then yes he will go off.
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Post by Jason Knetge on Mar 12, 2007 20:32:28 GMT -4
man I can't wait for the next part
this makes me wonder in the flip side universe are the twins Siamese twins
and hers a question in are universe gozer was the big bad guy but what was the people busters mane villein ?
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Post by BlackMaria on Mar 12, 2007 21:35:26 GMT -4
Very good; can't wait for the next installment; this story seemed to go by quickly.
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Post by EGBFan on Mar 13, 2007 7:19:36 GMT -4
I don't know just how many of us were already familiar with this story - but I wasn't, so I'm going into it completely fresh. Did Fritz at some time mention that this latest chapter was the point at which the original attempt on the story was abandoned? That seems very strange to me - why would anyone do that?
Aaaanyway, I'm really looking forward to what you come up with, Fritz, when you aren't in any way limited by what's already been done. ;D
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