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Post by Fritz on May 26, 2006 8:51:37 GMT -4
Love that picture! And the sign was perfectly in character. I see she really likes orange. ;D I know I usually color her in blue, but the yellow and orange felt more appropriate here. They're brighter colors. Interesting thought...
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Post by Fritz on Jul 3, 2006 9:12:56 GMT -4
Ghostbusters 2000: Gemini Rising, Part TwoJune 13, 1999--Timeline Y//---error---error---error--- // Lowell, Franky, Moira, and Carla are called when Mayor Zeddemore's speech is interrupted by a time rift. From the time rift comes a mysterious woman demanding to speak to "Professor" Spengler, and telling a strange story about the "Five Who Are One" and the "Gemini Twins"
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Post by SuperStantzio on Jul 3, 2006 12:16:21 GMT -4
That was neat I enjoyed it very much and now I'm looking foward to the last part. Good Job!
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Post by Kingpin on Jul 3, 2006 15:34:58 GMT -4
That was neat I enjoyed it very much and now I'm looking foward to the last part. Good Job! Heh heh... you have no idea what we're gonna be getting into.
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Post by Miss Janine on Jul 3, 2006 16:32:42 GMT -4
Ah, yes, our Fritz. The master of the twist. This is DEFINITELY getting more and more interesting!
More later, after more of us have read it. My comments would probably spoil it for 'em.
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Post by SuperStantzio on Jul 3, 2006 16:37:15 GMT -4
I agree. Something tells me, that the last part is going to be very interesting.
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Post by ghostdiva on Jul 3, 2006 16:53:36 GMT -4
Just...wow. I certainly didn't see any of this coming. And how are they going to fix it?
This reminds me of when Doc tore up Marty's letter in the 50's and I was like OMG! Now he's gonna die, because he didn't read the letter, how are they ever going to fix this!
This world that Pollux is in is the world that I fear! I never expected you to write it, though I probably should have.
This is like a crossover of a crossover of a crossover story. I had to read some stuff three or four times just to ge tmy bearings. My head hurts now. lol. Great fun. Looking forward to the next part...(conclusion?)
ghostdiva
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Post by Fritz on Jul 3, 2006 18:34:16 GMT -4
This world that Pollux is in is the world that I fear! I never expected you to write it, though I probably should have. One of the main reasons I came up with this plot is to introduce a world like this, as a way of dealing with it without permanently affecting the "real" continuity. After Part 3 (out next week) some of the other issues behind this story (creatively) might become a little clearer. At this point...the way the story is structured...it looks like there will be a bare minimum of six chapters. And a possible Epilog. --------------------------------------- I'd also like to mention to everyone to take a look at the Ectozone Art Page for spoiler pictures of "Ghostbusters 2000", that version of the original Ghostbusters, and Pollux.
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Post by Miss Janine on Jul 3, 2006 19:00:35 GMT -4
In other words, The Great American Novel!
Not that I'm complaining...
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Post by Kingpin on Jul 3, 2006 19:09:04 GMT -4
I agree. Something tells me, that the last part is going to be very interesting. Mwuahahahahahahahahaha! Sorry... you just don't know the half of it. ;D You're gonna enjoy the ride, each and every one of you.
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Post by Silent Seraphim on Jul 3, 2006 20:32:39 GMT -4
I agree. Something tells me, that the last part is going to be very interesting. Mwuahahahahahahahahaha! Sorry... you just don't know the half of it. ;D You're gonna enjoy the ride, each and every one of you. Ooh, goodie. I love these twisty turny, parallel-dimensiony type of stories. They really stretch the brainbox. ;D I love your versions of the original Ghostbusters. I think Peter, Egon and Janine in particular look quite accurate to their real-life counterparts. I also love that even in this different, fragmented timeline, where Janine is apparently happily married to Louis, it is still quite obvious that all is not quite right, and her affections still seem to lie elsewhere. I’m really interested to see where this goes, and how all these things get tied up. I can really see The Shadow of the Inquisitors, The Zodiac Imperative and Nodus all coming together now. It’s like one big behemoth of a story scattered across different realities, universes, stories and time periods. Amazing stuff.
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Post by ghostdiva on Jul 3, 2006 21:36:49 GMT -4
Well, I would normally complain, and I reserve that right still, lol. But considering the twists that seem to be in store, it is probably best to get this story in small doses. I don't think I could have taken in more than 20 pages of what we got today, it just throws the brain off! Which is awesome! BTW And I must say, for two babies that are only 20 minutes old those twins sure have made a mess of things, splitting time and all is a lot to have on your plate for a baby. Swallowing milk is a lot to have on your plate for a baby, lol. Poor twins, though considering their parents, they might as well get exposed to this stuff as soon as possible. After all, there's no time like the present, you know, considering there continues to be a present and all... ghostdiva
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Post by Miss Janine on Jul 4, 2006 7:47:07 GMT -4
But did we really think these would turn out to be normal kids? I mean, their parents ARE Ghostbusters. (Although Charlene and Jessica seem to be ok. But then, the glimpses we've had of Eric...) I actually love the idea of the alternate GBs, where Janine and Louis are married. It can let that be explored without interfering with the canon E/J relationship, and can be a glimpse of "what might have been". So, considering what Kingpin said, I have my seat belt buckled and my lap bar down. We just got to the top of the lift hill, and are in for a wild ride! (Sorry for the rollercoaster references, but it seems to fit!) Thought added Wednesday morning... Now that there seems to be some sort of temporal flux, is there a chance that when Egon and Janine get the twins back, time will somehow alter so that the whole thing with Nodus in Janine's room didn't happen? I get the idea that good ol' Nodus is about to be the focus of a LOT of attention from a LOT of people, oh, say, like Delphia, the Zodiac Lords, and others? I know one thing, Eden and JC sure came into this world with a bang!
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Post by Fritz on Jul 10, 2006 8:27:42 GMT -4
Slimer! And The Extreme Ghostbusters: Gemini Rising, Part ThreeJune 13, 1999--Timeline Y//---error---error---error--- // Slimer, Roland, Eduardo, Kylie, and Garrett are called when Mayor MacShayne's speech is interrupted by a time rift. From the time rift comes a mysterious man demanding to speak to Professor Spengler, and telling a strange story about the "Five Who Are One" and the "Gemini Twins" ----------------------- And don't be thrown off too far by the very beginning--the opening scene is the exact same one as Part 2. After that...well, I'll just have to let you see for yourself...
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Post by EGBFan on Jul 10, 2006 8:53:38 GMT -4
I think you'll all like this one - it's fun.
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