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Post by Fritz on Nov 2, 2004 20:27:42 GMT -4
The very last entry from the archive--all the later stories have already been covered. Ghostbusters West Coast: Love Sucks2004--Timeline Year 22 A day at the beach turns out to not be a day at the beach for Robert Griffiths, who finds himself wrapped in the machinations of a woman named Isabel. And her intentions may not be good..
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Post by Fritz on Oct 24, 2005 9:04:46 GMT -4
It appears nobody liked this one the first time. Well, screw you, I did, so I'm bumping it.
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Post by Kingpin on Oct 24, 2005 13:07:45 GMT -4
Hey, I kinda liked it... sucked that Robert's date was the equivilant of a vampire... but it was an amusing story.
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Post by Fritz on Oct 25, 2005 10:20:08 GMT -4
Y'know, I'm gonna say this despite the fact I probably shouldn't...
This story, by far, was the raciest thing I ever put out, with lots of innuendo, outright descriptions of characters as naked, and an intense scene toward the end that (had Isabell's plans not been derailed) probably would've resulted in a rape.
But because Egon Spengler wasn't in it, I didn't hear a peep about any of that.
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Post by Kingpin on Oct 25, 2005 10:25:19 GMT -4
This coming from the guy who did fanart that would make said person scream? Well... I guess it's a simple case, even in the movie, sex was incredibly innuendo, and in the case of something based on a cartoon... it's almost unthinkable. At least, that's my theory.
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Post by Fritz on Oct 25, 2005 19:38:19 GMT -4
Lol...yeah, I know..I guess it's because I was a little older when the movie and the cartoon came out, it's easier for me to think "dirty" things about it. Like how no five year old is going to find anything strange about Fred and Daphne always going off by themselves while Velman, Shaggy, and Scooby get chased by the crook in a rubber suit...whereas when you're twenty, it seems "clear" that they're going off for some "quality time"
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Post by Jeremy Hicks on Oct 28, 2005 2:59:52 GMT -4
And an intense scene toward the end that (had Isabell's plans not been derailed) probably would've resulted in a rape. Multiple times, and possibly a murder, if you wanted to take it to its darker end. I know, I know, shut up.
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Post by Miss Janine on Oct 28, 2005 3:38:47 GMT -4
Boy, am I glad my character wasn't around for THAT one...
And I would have heard the scream from here...
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Post by Fritz on Oct 28, 2005 10:27:45 GMT -4
And an intense scene toward the end that (had Isabell's plans not been derailed) probably would've resulted in a rape. Multiple times, and possibly a murder, if you wanted to take it to its darker end. I know, I know, shut up. Suffice it to say let's not dwell on such things too much--the root DNA of this property is a comedy, after all. There are evil monsters out there, and bad things do happen, but not all that often..
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Post by SuperStantzio on Oct 28, 2005 14:39:21 GMT -4
That was good story very intesne. Great Job!
Farah
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Post by Fritz on Sept 18, 2006 9:15:01 GMT -4
Bumpage for 2006
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