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« Thread Started on Aug 17, 2007, 6:03pm » | |
This is just a little fluffy romance story. Enjoy!
Title: I Love You
Author: Shafarah White
Disclaimer: I don't own the Real Ghostbusters.
Copyright: 2007
Note: This is a early romance fic before CJ and Jules
were born. This is when Ray and Elaine were newlyweds.
One day at the local skating rink, Ray and Elaine were
enjoying their time together. Tonight was 'Married Couples Night'.
They been married for 2 months.
They had been skating for a while and decided to leave the floor to take a short break to get something to eat from the food stand.
Ray and Elaine sat down in the second booth with their food and started to eat.
"Isn't this wonderful, darling?" Elaine asked, reaching and taking Ray's hand into her hand.
Ray smiled at her and squeezed her hand, "Yes, it is,sweetheart. I waited all day to take you skating. I know how much you love it.".
Elaine looked pleased as she went over to give Ray a kiss on his cheek.
Soon as they finshed cleaning up, they skated back over to the rink.
When entering, Elaine slipped and almost fell on her back, "AHHH!" She shrieked but Ray caught her just in time.
"Are you okay, Elaine?" Ray asked in concern, holding her in his arms.
Elaine nodded her head as she looked into Ray's brown eyes, "My hero." She cooed softly to her husband.
Then she began planting kisses on Ray's face that caused him to start blushing furiously.
Once Ray got it together, he then took Elaine into his arms. As they looked into each other's eyes lovingly; Elaine said,
"I love you, Ray."
"I love you too, Elaine." Ray replied.
The End
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| | Re: I love You Fic
« Reply #1 on Aug 18, 2007, 1:16am » | |
this was sweet . Good work
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SuperStantzio
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| | Re: I love You Fic
« Reply #2 on Aug 18, 2007, 2:33am » | |
Why thank you! I'm glad that you enjoy it! 
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"Bart Bucks" are not legal tender.
Goldfish don't bounce.
I will not mess with the opening credits.
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SuperStantzio
I Have No Life
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Super Stantzio is being kissed by Princess Elaine!
Joined: Jun 2004
Gender: Female
Posts: 513
Location: Maple Heights, Ohio
| | Re: I love You Fic
« Reply #3 on Aug 21, 2007, 2:07am » | |
I made some edits to the story and it sounds much better! 
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"Bart Bucks" are not legal tender.
Goldfish don't bounce.
I will not mess with the opening credits.
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